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Missing in Venice

The following is a short story based off of the image titled Missing in Venice from The Mysteries of Harris Burdick by Van Allsburg. Countless people have written their own versions of the stories found in his book and this my addition to that collection.

 

Missing In Venice

Even with her mighty engines in reverse, the ocean liner was pulled further and further into the canal. The ship was in chaos, everyone was clamoring to know what was going on. People swarmed the edges peering over the side of the ship at the buildings they were just squeezing past. Crowds clamored at the door to the control room demanding to know what was going on.

Atea wasn’t worried about their situation, in fact everything was going as planned. Under the cover of all the chaos she was making her way carefully through the inner parts of the ship towards her goal. She’d been planning this heist for years and excitement at how well it was working bubbled up within her threatening to burst out in laughter. But she had to keep it in, at least until she was finished. Then she could celebrate. Continue reading


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The School for Good and Evil Book Review

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Rating (out of 5): 3.5
Genre: Fantasy
Release Date: May 14, 2013
Series:  The School for Good and Evil
Series Volume: 1
Profanity: None
Violence: Mild
Sexual Content: None
Age Recommendation: 8+
Author Website:
http://somanchainani.net/
http://iacopobruno.blogspot.com/

Summary:

At the School for Good and Evil, failing your fairy tale is not an option.

Welcome to the School for Good and Evil, where best friends Sophie and Agatha are about to embark on the adventure of a lifetime.

With her glass slippers and devotion to good deeds, Sophie knows she’ll earn top marks at the School for Good and join the ranks of past students like Cinderella, Rapunzel, and Snow White. Meanwhile, Agatha, with her shapeless black frocks and wicked black cat, seems a natural fit for the villains in the School for Evil.

The two girls soon find their fortunes reversed—Sophie’s dumped in the School for Evil to take Uglification, Death Curses, and Henchmen Training, while Agatha finds herself in the School for Good, thrust among handsome princes and fair maidens for classes in Princess Etiquette and Animal Communication.
But what if the mistake is actually the first clue to discovering who Sophie and Agatha really are . . . ?

The School for Good and Evil is an epic journey into a dazzling new world, where the only way out of a fairy tale is to live through one.
Review:
The School for Good and Evil looked to be a very promising read, and turned out to, just not in the way I had expected it to. I wasn’t quite sure what I was expecting when I began reading the book, maybe a short term at the school then the two girls being sent off into their own fairy tales or something but whatever it was the book threw me for a loop within the first chapter. This story was far darker than I had imagined it being, told more in the style of a Grimm fairytale than most that we see today. By the time I had finished the book I had enjoyed it but I also had some issues with it. Continue reading


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Alcatraz Verses the Evil Librarians Book Review

alcatraz Rating (out of 5): 5
Genre: Fantasy
Release Date: October 1, 2007
Series: Alcatraz
Series Volume: 1
Profanity: None
Violence: Mild
Sexual Content: None
Age Recommendation: 8+
Author Website: http://brandonsanderson.com/

Summary (found on Amazon):

The evil Librarians are coming!

A hero with an incredible talent…for breaking things. A life-or-death mission…to rescue a bag of sand. A fearsome threat from a powerful secret network…the evil Librarians.

Alcatraz Smedry doesn’t seem destined for anything but disaster. On his 13th birthday he receives a bag of sand, which is quickly stolen by the cult of evil Librarians plotting to take over the world. The sand will give the Librarians the edge they need to achieve world domination. Alcatraz must stop them!…by infiltrating the local library, armed with nothing but eyeglasses and a talent for klutziness.
Review:

My brother is in love with this author, but I haven’t read him until now. On a recommendation from not one but two librarians (GASP I know) I decided to read this book. And I must say I was not displeased with how it turned out.

I started Alcatraz knowing only the title, but with a title like Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians who really needs a summary? And if the title doesn’t hook you I guarantee the first chapter will. This book is really unlike anything I’ve read in a long time, and I’m hard pressed to find anything to compare it to. Continue reading


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A Post on Prompts

I usually don’t like writing poems. I have nothing against poetry or even reading them. I even have quite a few that I really enjoy going back to every now and then but for the most part I’m not what you would call a poetry person. I’m telling you this because recently I submitted a poem to a competition that was written due to a prompt.

A few years ago I took a creative writing course at the college I was attending. During the course of this class we spent equal time writing both poetry and prose, something I was not happy about at the time. But I wanted to get as much out of the class as I could so I stuck it out churning out the proper lines and stanzas required for each poetry assignment. Eventually I was assigned to write a pantoum. For those of you who’ve never heard of this style of poetry it a Malaysian poetic form that was introduced to the West by Victor Hugo. The Pantoum can be unlimited in it’s stanzas and follows a standard rhyme form of ABAB. Things get interesting when you begin to write the poem itself, everything is said twice. 

Here is an example of what I’m talking about:

Stanza 1:

Line 1

Line 2

Line 3

Line 4

Stanza 2:

Line 5 (repeat of line 2 in stanza 1)

Line 6 (new line)

Line 7   (repeat of line 4 in stanza 1)

Line 8 (new line) 

Stanza 3/Last Stanza (This is the format for the last stanza no matter how many preceding stanzas exist):

Line 9   (line 2 of the previous stanza)

Line 10 (line 3 of the first stanza)

Line 11 (line 4 of the previous stanza)

Line 12 (line 1 of the first stanza) 

This assignment spurned me into creating the piece of poetry that I submitted to the contest I mentioned.  Without my Professor’s prompt I would have never written the poem or had anything to submit to this particular competition. It’s been 2 years since I’ve last submitted my work anywhere and whether I win or lose this competition I’m glad I had something I was confident in to submit.

In the Teen Writing Club I Co-lead we use prompts monthly to get the teens to expand their writing. It is amazing to me how many different stories or poems can come from a simple prompt. I love seeing how each person has put their own unique spin on what they’re given. And they enjoy it too, many have talked about how the prompts have pushed them as writers.

Some of my best, and worst, work has been due to prompts that I’ve been assigned or have found on my own. I’ve written things that I’ve never wanted to and things that I’d never dared try before. They’ve helped me expand my writing and given me breakthroughs in areas that I’ve wanted to try but haven’t known where to start.

Prompts have power. They have the power to ignite imagination and cause people to do things that they would never have done before, with surprising results. So the next time you want to expand your writing borders try a prompt, it’s easy to find them online with a simple Google (or Bing) search, you may end up getting your next winning piece or successful novel from it.

Here is a list of a few prompts I’ve used before:

  • Write a Pantoum.
  • Use these 7 items in a story: A bottle of Baily’s Irish Cream, A locket with one picture missing, a crack, a fedora, a cat, a conch shell, and an old tattered dictionary.
  • Write a story/poem based on a piece of instrumental music.
  • Write a page from a book titled: How to Survive a Boring Class.
  • Create a short story that is 26 sentences long, each sentence beginning with the next letter of the alphabet.
  • Silvery flakes drifted down, glittering in the bright light of the harvest moon. The blackbird, screeched… 
  • Write a story focusing on a Damsel in Distress. 

Feel free to try a few of the examples or tell me of your own experience.

~Dawn


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Stealing the Preacher Review

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Rating (out of 5): 5

Genre: Christian Fiction
Release Date: Jun 1, 2013
Series: None, but one related book: Short Straw Bride
Violence: very mild
Profanity: none
Sexual Content: None
Age: Young Adult +
Author’s Website: http://www.karenwitemeyer.com/

 

Book Summary (from author’s website):

On his way to interview for a position at a church in the Piney Woods of Texas, Crockett Archer can scarcely believe it when he’s forced off the train by a retired outlaw and presented to the man’s daughter as the minister she requested for her birthday. Worried this unfortunate detour will ruin his chances of finally serving a congregation of his own, Crockett is determined to escape. But when he finally gets away, he’s haunted by the memory of the young woman he left behind—a woman whose dreams now hinge on him.

For months, Joanna Robbins prayed for a preacher. A man to breathe life back into the abandoned church at the heart of her community. A man to assist her in fulfilling a promise to her dying mother. A man to help her discover answers to the questions that have been on her heart for so long. But just when it seems God has answered her prayers, it turns out the parson is there against his will and has dreams of his own calling him elsewhere. Is there any way she can convince Crockett to stay in her little backwoods community? And does the attraction between them have any chance of blossoming when Joanna’s outlaw father is dead-set against his daughter courting a preacher?

 

Review:

This is the third book by Karen Witemeyer that I’ve read and I must say that she hasn’t let me down yet. Stealing the preacher is a delightful read that captivates you (literally) from the very first chapter.

It doesn’t take long to see where the title comes in to play in this book as Crockett Archer, on his way to a new preaching position, finds himself kidnapped from the train and hauled off as a birthday present for the outlaw’s daughter. Joanna Robbins has been praying for a preacher to come and is more than a little surprised when one shows up in the most unconventional of ways. The two of them end up working together to both unite their community and lead Joanna’s father into the faith. Continue reading


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Welcome

Welcome to Plots and Pickaxes on wordpress! I hope you all enjoy it here as much as I plan to.

I am an aspiring author so there is the possibility of my posting about my work as well as a few of my shorter pieces on here.

Along with my writing I will be posting writing advice/information about writing and book reviews. I may review a movie or game but most of the reviews will consist of book ones.

As for myself I am currently working on a book for young adults. I’ve written quite a few short pieces of fiction as well. I am currently in college which keeps me busy. I love to write (if you couldn’t tell) and I work at a library, which is one of the best jobs in the world.

That’s all for now!

~Dawn